Recent Great Writing Articles

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I am sensing a theme in choosing these writing articles. My sub-conscious is telling me to focus on what my characters want!

“I’m here to tell you that nothing—I mean nothing—makes a novel harder to follow, much less care about, than not knowing what it is the characters want.”

https://litreactor.com/columns/dirty-little-secrets-part-two-why-your-beta-readers-never-finished-your-novel

“Can writing advice be distilled down to one game-changing essential nugget? I’d say yes: What does this character want? Well, that’s obvious, you think, as obvious as smiling at your kids. But just like that nugget of parenting wisdom, there’s more to it than that. Because what your character wants may conflict with the wants of a host of other characters, for starters. What your character wants may put them at odds with themselves. What your character wants may be not one thing but two things, and those two things may be at odds. And if you can stay focused on all those wants, you will end up with one hell of a story.”

https://writerunboxed.com/2019/02/20/parenting-advice-elevator-pitches-and-the-essential-heart-of-story/

“Four qualities are spot-on in this speech. These are common to all great Villain Speeches and they always work.”

https://stevenpressfield.com/2019/02/harvey-keitels-villain-speech-in-cop-land/

Book Rec:

I’m working on an outline for my novel, since I’m stuck and need the help. I’ve had this book for ages (again! I really need to read all the books I already own) and have found it great for getting my creative side working again. I have more of her books which I need to read next.

Outlining Your Novel: Map Your Way to Success by K. M. Weiland.

“What a character wants is bound inextricably to the arc he will follow over the course of the book. The changes that transform him from who he was at the beginning of the book to who he is at the end will be the direct result of how he goes about getting what he wants, or perhaps how the course of the story changes what he wants.”

Links List

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Writing links

How to Create Conflict by Discovering Your Character’s Objects of Desire. “But when you keep your characters loyal to their external wants and bound to their internal needs, making innovative choice after innovative choice to somehow achieve both objects of desire despite the odds and consequences, readers will love you for it.”

Do You Have a Story Concept, or Just a Cool Idea? Three elements for a story concept: “At least one character that is actively pursuing a goal,” “Urgent motivation for said goal,” and “Obvious and escalating conflict for the goal.”

Change How You Think links

3 Ways to Make Stress Your Friend. “Choose a different perspective.” “Shift how you interpret your body’s signals.” “Train with the Body Scan meditation.” This and the next link relate back to my post about shifting the way you think so you can change the way you live.

Change Your Language, Change Your Life. “Replace I have to with I get to.” “Instead of I’m going through something difficult, how about I’m growing through something difficult?” “Rather than shouldmust, or ought to, use prefer to, want to, or choose to.” “Try the shift from I can’t do this or I’m not good at this to This is challenging, and I’ll get it, or I’m still learning, and I’ll keep at it.”   

Writing, Reading and Gratitude

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Grateful for today:

The magnificent blue sky.

Recent Writing Bookmarks:

My Ongoing Feud with Billy Joel. Great advice for writing dialogue. Make dialogue a confrontation not a conversation. Give each character a distinct voice. Look for other ways to make how your character talks memorable. Don’t be a name dropper. Don’t go nuts with dialogue tags. Don’t go overboard with dialect.

The Villain Adapts, but Does Not Change. Keep the villains coming at the hero from everywhere. The villain adapts but does not change. The hero is the one who changes. If the villain changed, he’d be the hero.

The Key Components of a Compelling Character (According to Psychology). Make them want. Make them unique. Make them more.

The Inner Struggle: How to Show a Character’s Repressed Emotions. Over and under-reactions. Tics and tells. Flight, fight or freeze. Passive-aggressive reactions. Incongruencies.

Recent Reads

Romancing the Beat: Story Structure for Romance Novels (How to Write Kissing Books) (Volume 1). This really made me re-think and re-structure my novel. Which was supposed to be a thriller romance but wasn’t working on the romance front.

Links List

Sperm Count Zero:

It’s “just a waiting game until one or another of the stupid things our stupid species is up to finally gets us. But as it turns out, no surprise: men first. Second instance of no surprise: We’re going to take the women down with us.”

“the human race is apparently on a trend line toward becoming unable to reproduce itself. Sperm counts went from 99 million sperm per milliliter of semen in 1973 to 47 million per milliliter in 2011, and the decline has been accelerating.”

Terrifying on how we’re destroying ourselves. This article gave me ideas for a novel.

Preventing Muscle Loss as We Age:

“no matter how old or out of shape you are, you can restore much of the strength you already lost. ”

“start a strength-training program using free weights, resistance bands or machines”

I’ll be phasing in a strength training program soon as I am now beginning an aerobic program while changing my eating habits. Don’t do everything at once!

Links List

 

  • The Bodies of the Girls Who Made Me: Fanfic and the Modern World. I’ve written fanfic and this essay was such a revelation for me. “I honestly think the reason so many fanfic writers are women/girls [or gay, or gender-noncomforting, or some combination of the above] is a mixture of social stigma [“ew, fanfic is a GIRLY thing, ew, it’s all PORN, and most of it is GAY PORN”] and seeking a way to empathize with The Default. I also think this contributes to the prevalence of male/male couples in fanfic even when written by authors who identify as straight: by being only The Default, we move away from the “ew icky girls” reactions. But that’s another conversation.” AND “Enter The Default, that strong-jawed, clear-eyed, straight, white, cisgendered, able-bodied, vaguely Christian (but not too Christian) male.”
  • Keto for Women: 7 Tips to Make it Work. I’m on keto day #9 and I’ve lost 4 pounds so far. I’ve been focusing on adding more protein and fat and less carbs. All the rest I can add in if I think it’s necessary and if I think it will help with my goals.
  • None to Run. I am walker but I’d like to be a runner. Again, I think it will help with my help goals, I don’t have to join a gym (although, I may) and I can do it anywhere. I just started this on Monday. Eight 30 second runs each followed by a 2 minute recovery—not too bad. Challenging enough but not impossible for me. And it builds gradually.
  • Evolve by Imagine Dragons. Music I’m listening to now. Great to walk/fun to. Good beat. A little bit different. Great lyrics.
  • Brave Enough by Lindsey Stirling. More music I’m loving right now. I guess I’m enjoying something a bit different from the pop music on the radio. Bought this for the song “Something Wild” and I am enjoying the whole album.
  • Mark Hamill Instagram. I may join Instagram just to follow him. He dressed as a Stormtrooper and moved through the San Diego Comic Con incognito. Love this!

Pac Man or Chess?

Because ‘having everything’ is playing life like Pac Man instead of chess.

In Pac Man you never win. It just gets faster and faster and harder and harder UNTIL YOU DIE. Chess? There is strategy, patience, willingness to ‘let go’ of even ‘important’ pieces to protect the most crucial one. In chess, you CAN actually win!

The Priority Parallax: Everything is Not as Important as It Appears

Kristen Lamb always gets me thinking.

Make a choice. Every day.

I always have a story going on in my head. The last few months it’s been a fan-fiction crossover of Harry Potter and Battlestar Galactica. Part of me wants to write it. Magic vs tech. Very cool. And I’d get to kill the whole Cylons-get-religion plotline that my atheist heart despised.

All the Fandoms

I may write that someday, for fun and to stop it nagging at me, but for now my desire is to write an original novel. (I don’t know if that’s my greatest desire. I keep telling myself that. It is on my mind daily.)

I’m at a point in my life where I have unencumbered time to write. The kids are in college and it isn’t necessary for me to work outside the home. Last week I was completely alone while my husband traveled for business.

And I wrote NOTHING.

I binged watched Grey’s Anatomy. (I didn’t even watch BSG or HP with the excuse of research.) I felt guilty and gave myself many depressive mental tongue-lashings. But I still didn’t write.

I did work on my novel for an hour today. Because I can muster up will-power on occasion. But first I did laundry, sorted out some clothes I no longer wanted, made a lovely breakfast, re-did my wreath for Spring, ordered some photo prints, photographed the cat…

Resistance 1, Me 0. (The War of Art, Steven Pressfield)

I’m currently reading The Modern Library Writer’s Workshop : A Guide to the Craft of Fiction by Stephen Koch and two things have stuck with me so far:

  1. You have to sacrifice. There’s only so much time. You can’t do everything. You can’t binge watch Grey’s Anatomy and make a dent in producing a novel. You have to choose. Every day a choice. Write or ____. And most days you have to choose to write or the novel will never be finished. Or the next, slightly better novel will never get finished. And so on.
  2. Your first drafts are like free writing. Just keep writing. (And now Dory is singing in my head.) Get the draft done. Edit and re-write later.

What does this all mean to me? I need to write. Daily. And without interruption.

Make a choice. Every day.

Mitten March 2018

 

 

 

“The Unpersuadables: Adventures with the Enemies of Science” Quote

An expert on the psychology of evil, Professor Roy Baumeister, has written that ‘dangerous people, from playground bullies to warmongering dictators, consist mainly of those who have highly favourable views about themselves. They strike out at others who question or dispute those favourable views.’

“The Unpersuadables: Adventures with the Enemies of Science” by Will Storr

Something to remember as a writer when creating characters.